My first Fanfict

Good Evening all,

Finally I've already published my story in Fanfiction. Hope many critics and suggestion for my first story. Hope I can learn more how to make it.

So this is the summary:

"Aku tidak mau bernyanyi jika kau tidak ada di sampingku!" geramku. "Kau bukan anak-anak lagi, Sakura."/"Aku dan Sasuke,... kami sepasang kekasih." ungkap Shion. / "Aku... menyerah. Lihat! Mereka sangat serasi kan?."

If you like to read story, Please read and give me your suggestion of this story....

Let's read this. My Song, My Story